[Russell Sobie]

- Race:
Be extra carefull in turn 1. It is very hard to win a race in T1, but very easy to lose it. One mistake there can crash multiple cars.
You need to pass the rear of the other car on the straight to earn the right to dispute on the braking*. Don't dive bomb. Click here to learn more (link to be inserted)
Always give space to the opponent beside you. Don't cut or push him out of the track trying to keep your ideal race line - you have to adjust. 
If you accidentally hit another car during a dispute, consider giving back the position... this might prevent a protest against you.

Bolded my suggested changes. Everything else? (thumbsup)